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aCeta

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Captures emotion very well, the outtro was spectacular IMO.
I sort of agree with the previous comment with the VOX portion in the beginning, it was hard to hear and subtle (Which may or may not have been okay) but it seemed out of place.

Other than that, sounds like gold to me.

I like it, but for some reason is just doesn't sound full. like its missing out on a certain range.. Like its being put through a filter of sorts

My friend, you just got an Insta5'd!

My only wish is length... it need to be longer T__T
Piano is awesome
Strings caught me

Nuff said.

Its pretty well done I'd say. The beginning though has a high hat that just hurts my ears a bit...
I enjoyed the weird time signature that i THOUGHT I heard, but it's really just 4/4

overall, pretty good!

SpeTheof responds:

Thanks, to be honest i was bored to fix those hats xD

Well, I would say there is enough variation to it to keep one interested. BUT the bass drowns and clips over everything making the entire song rather difficult to listen to.

Find a way to master that one bit so the rest of it doesn't clash and make grinding sounds throughout the song.

BTW, at 4:14 is probably my most favorite part. Everything is clear and just generally sounds cool. I like the small glitchy bits here and there as well with the snare. But at 5:57 that bass comes back and makes me sad haha.

ReddVampirus responds:

Thank you for your feedback. Again, I made this back in 2005. I have no training nor any knowledge of how to make 'the perfect song'. I was experimenting when I made this. Again, I appreciate the rating and the feedback, aCeta! ^^ I hope you stick around to listen to more of my work.

While I do agree some variation would be nice, the vocal work was pretty darn good and the layering was awesome. You can tell where you put the work at in this piece.

Just change up the drum beats a little bit, add a drop or two extra in there and you might even be able to do a key change if you want to re-record a bit.

At that point, its perfect and no one can say otherwise haha!

Very smooth sounding, nothing was out of place that I heard. Empty space was filled pretty nicely. The only thing i suggest maybe is to pan some instruments a little bit off to the side to not have everything in the middle.

Other than that, fantastic!

It's made pretty well, humanized and realistic. And above all, it loops fantastically! Great job.

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